This was a gift that I gave to my sister for her wedding shower. She has already seen in, though the gift is not finished. Neither of us are satisfied with the outcome. It spells her future name:) What would you do to make it different, to make it pleasing to the eye?
Oh, I really like it!! You did a great job! What part are you and your sister not satisfied with? I would maybe try to find a more defined "r", but other than that - I think it's awesome.
It took me awhile to figure out that you were spelling "Heier". Maybe get all the pictures in a long line (panoramic-style) and have the last photo of the two of them together to have some slight color, to set it apart (I was trying to figure out if it was also a letter, then realized it's just a very cute photo). Great idea! You're onto something beautiful!
Because the second "E" is the literal letter, I thought the swirl was an "O." Not until I read the above comment did I know otherwise. I think that so much of mixing actual letters with objects meant to be letters may not be the best choice if you're looking for ideas to change things around. I also agree with the panoramic-style layout mentioned above. But this is definitely looking really cool! Awesome work
I agree with Krista, and try to make it all one line if possible. I think if youleft the pictures the same, added the color to the couple picture you would know exactly what it is right away and would look gorgeous. Although, I like it how it is now too, but a bit difficult to figure out exactly what it is saying.
I agree with Krista and the last comment. put the name all on one line and do something different with the pic. add color? make it bigger and center it on the bottom of the name?
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Oh, I really like it!! You did a great job! What part are you and your sister not satisfied with?
I would maybe try to find a more defined "r", but other than that - I think it's awesome.
It took me awhile to figure out that you were spelling "Heier". Maybe get all the pictures in a long line (panoramic-style) and have the last photo of the two of them together to have some slight color, to set it apart (I was trying to figure out if it was also a letter, then realized it's just a very cute photo). Great idea! You're onto something beautiful!
Because the second "E" is the literal letter, I thought the swirl was an "O." Not until I read the above comment did I know otherwise. I think that so much of mixing actual letters with objects meant to be letters may not be the best choice if you're looking for ideas to change things around. I also agree with the panoramic-style layout mentioned above.
But this is definitely looking really cool! Awesome work
I agree with Krista, and try to make it all one line if possible. I think if youleft the pictures the same, added the color to the couple picture you would know exactly what it is right away and would look gorgeous. Although, I like it how it is now too, but a bit difficult to figure out exactly what it is saying.
I agree with Krista and the last comment. put the name all on one line and do something different with the pic. add color? make it bigger and center it on the bottom of the name?
cant wait to see how it turns out!
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